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Huan Yi
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     Darla

Vision of someone
not yet seen
or heard, you moved
a sense of change.

Toys
wouldn't do
as they had before.
Days
were trips
to where you lived.

Briefly, and then
to different schools,
innumerable miles
with separate years.

I still have your picture.
The night is pure.

I hope your life
is full of good.
  


© Copyright 2004 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-19-2004 07:44 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

A wonderful wish for a good life to an old friend.
Very nicely said and much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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Very nice...James
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Much beyond the words, my friend, words special unto themselves....

jwesley
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4 posted 10-19-2004 09:05 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

I think you have said very well the feelings
that many of us share...of a friend who
we remember,  even when they are far away.
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Well done, John!
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Such honest and sincere sentiments and wishes...
yet peaceful all the same.
I like this.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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wonderful!
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hidden feelings.

beautiful.
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john,

wonderful

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