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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 10-19-2004 03:20 PM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Cpat Hair

I wonder
What words the wind whispers
To the fragile leave in fall
That turns cheeks blush
And moves them to murmuring sighs
That remind me of how you
In half lidded release
Would begin to mumble words
Like
        Yessssssss
Then loose your own grip
And fall in a tumbled wave
Of what I thought must be color
Yet could not see through my own eyes

Iíve listened
    And tried to pick out the phrases
So softly left on leaf
But wind seems to simply chuckle
    Silent whishes of vowels
To flood my ears with the moan
Of tossed clouds
     Rumpled on a bed of blue
As if lovers who have tossed
Clothes aside and lay now supine
In an afterglow of sated summer heat
Too tired to dress
          Too wicked to care

They turn golden now
   As the blush retires from tips
To stem

And I wonder
    What whispers in this
The autumn wind

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 10-19-2004 03:22 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

again Ron, I am in awe.......

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


2 posted 10-19-2004 03:24 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

As if lovers who have tossed
Clothes aside and lay now supine
In an afterglow of sated summer heat
Too tired to dress
          Too wicked to care

~*~

oh...

yessssssssssssssss
*Stardust*
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3 posted 10-19-2004 03:26 PM       View Profile for *Stardust*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *Stardust*

Cpat Hair this is wonderfully sensual.
I very much enjoy reading your work.

Grinning is my second language.

quatro
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4 posted 10-19-2004 03:29 PM       View Profile for quatro   Email quatro   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit quatro's Home Page   View IP for quatro

Awesome job!!!  I was right there in the midst of your words to the very last drop.

quatro
Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 10-19-2004 03:53 PM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

another yummy addition.

If you keep writing I will build stuff...



"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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6 posted 10-19-2004 04:11 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

As if lovers who have tossed
Clothes aside and lay now supine
In an afterglow of sated summer heat
Too tired to dress
          Too wicked to care


I echo Karilea...yesssssss.

another for the library.

Maree

and I am haunted
by my illicit exquisite dream
but I can't really wake up
so I just drift in between

~ani difranco~

babygirlwlove
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7 posted 10-19-2004 04:48 PM       View Profile for babygirlwlove   Email babygirlwlove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for babygirlwlove

deft tapestry of words and sound that allow the elements to rise right off the page...

love how you fingerpaint...
**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

vandana
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8 posted 10-19-2004 04:59 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

liked it
serenity blaze
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9 posted 10-19-2004 05:48 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Now you tease, because you KNOW how I feel about Autumn...

and as to what I hear?

why, that would be,

"please...

y'rogue you.
EagleScorpion
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10 posted 10-19-2004 06:02 PM       View Profile for EagleScorpion   Email EagleScorpion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleScorpion

excellent metaphors

ingenious..

while im going to be spending the better part of autumn getting dearly laid, i still think this poem has a profound message
muted
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11 posted 10-19-2004 09:40 PM       View Profile for muted   Email muted   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for muted

this blanket of leaves
play at your feet
as the giggle of wind
tickles with wishes
and whispers
   ~that its time to live again~
wranx
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12 posted 10-19-2004 10:01 PM       View Profile for wranx   Email wranx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wranx

Good lord, man!

What have you been drinking!

(Send some 'round to my table, will ya?)

NICE!
littlewing
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13 posted 10-20-2004 09:27 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Oh, you are brightening my morning, Ron

As if lovers who have tossed
Clothes aside and lay now supine
In an afterglow of sated summer heat
Too tired to dress
          Too wicked to care

Larry C
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14 posted 11-06-2004 03:25 PM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Cpat Hair,
Mighty fine indeed. I always wondered what it was that attracted me to fall and now I know. Excellent kind sir.
passing shadows
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dang! how do you do this?
 
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