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*Stardust*
Junior Member
since 2004-10-14
Posts 21
Right there with you

0 posted 2004-10-19 03:10 PM



Long ago,
our love was too new
for ghosts, fossils or flaws
to new to have a past
to talk over
or collect memories from.


Now
as the ghosts and memories
line our attics
the fossils fill our shelves
we wonder
are the flaws too numerous
to repair
or will the firm foundation
of the past
withstand
the phantom imperfections
of the future?

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quatro
Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392
Galveston, Texas
1 posted 2004-10-19 03:31 PM


"Now
as the ghosts and memories
line our attics
the fossils fill our shelves
we wonder
are the flaws too numerous
to repair
or will the firm foundation
of the past
withstand
the phantom imperfections
of the future?"

Wonderful passage!  If only we knew how to know what the future holds for our relationships with ourselves and our lives.

quatro

Toerag
Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
2 posted 2004-10-19 04:39 PM


Keep dreaming of your future....I see it filled with love and warmth and erotica..you'll see....just keep reading emails and be patient....I can see the future sometimes....
scorpio
Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
3 posted 2004-10-19 05:12 PM


In an imperfect world
Love can only be
An emotion of beauty.
Flaws must be overlooked.
And passion allowed to run
It's course.

In love's eye there is only beauty Stardust.

believe in what your heart feels...

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