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Toerag
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Ala bam a

0 posted 2004-10-19 12:00 PM



Balladeer was in the garden,
Digging a hole so deep,
The neighbor saw him thru the fence,
Just to take a peek.

"Deer" he said, "What are you doing?
Digging that great wide hole?"
'Deer replied through tears of sadness,
"Burying my goldfish Joe"

The neighbor said, "That's too bad,
But you don't need a big hole like that?"
'Deer replied as he finished his task,
"But he's inside of your {friggin') cat!"



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Mary Parry
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1 posted 2004-10-19 12:07 PM


Never stop, we need the smiles.

Mary

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-10-19 12:10 PM


Toerag
Cats will be cats. LOL

babygirlwlove
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3 posted 2004-10-19 12:16 PM


**lmao**

crazy toe~
**babygirL**

LeeJ
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4 posted 2004-10-19 12:42 PM


in respose to Sy's comments

Yes, and boys will be boys

teehee...giggles

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
5 posted 2004-10-19 12:48 PM


lmao
quatro
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6 posted 2004-10-19 01:38 PM


I've always enjoyed humor in poetry in you do it so well!  Thanks for the laugh.

quatro

Toerag
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Ala bam a
7 posted 2004-10-19 02:34 PM


I want to thank you all for the very kind replies....I wish I could be serious once in awhile...but all these crazy thoughts come to mind while I try to write something serious and they always seem better than my original idea...Guess I'm destined to be a clown......besides, the clown's face hides my real feelings so well...
Susan
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walking the surreal
8 posted 2004-10-19 02:42 PM


Hahahaha - chuckle -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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In Your Poetic Mind
9 posted 2004-10-19 03:37 PM


{ } check your email.....

~~*~~
Read between the lines
look deep into each word
and you will understand the
depth of my soul (GE)
~~**~~

Cpat Hair
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10 posted 2004-10-19 03:39 PM


So Toe...
did you miss your cat?

*Stardust*
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Right there with you
11 posted 2004-10-19 03:43 PM


This is a fun write Mr. Toe.
But, I believe your comedy hides
your lonely soul quite well.

Smiling is my second language.

Toerag
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Ala bam a
12 posted 2004-10-19 04:01 PM


Stardust....you have no idea....
*Alli4000*
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13 posted 2004-10-19 04:30 PM


Thanks for the smile.

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

Denise
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14 posted 2004-10-19 09:49 PM



Magnus
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15 posted 2004-10-19 10:00 PM


Toe, be careful...for 'deer, the crafty
devil...may take to making some remark about
the mask and your real face....NOT!

Good one,  enjoyed it..

suthern
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16 posted 2004-10-20 04:58 PM


LOL... Now if a cat took an interest in YOUR fish... he'd be dinner! LOL

How IS Killer, anyway? *G*

Enjoyed this, sweets...

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