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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Night birds give birth to heart gifts And I suppose the fortune In your hands, your face, your arms Your desires Am I the tiny matter with long tunes? Which sights inspirational Naked next to your mind Captured Embrace of soul Your eyes run with mine Hand in hand Prayer dreams patient Overwhelming dawns in succession with change I trace your lips…. Mystery alive fulfills an illusion of divinity Where I knew you before Slightly touching Slightly knowing Slightly our souls yearn to dance To our own music Gentle and easy, marvels the art of you Of where nature leads us You shall want for nothing Your eyes speak like a child’s Entrenched in oceanic potential Living close to nature Deliberate marrow of life Deep green forests Bring forth what is ours You snuggle close to the sense of me You…the miraculous prophet Of some metaphysical philosophy Beyond All that is articulate in us Dew become a shower eternal In moments, voices, words I look into the graciousness of colors Hues Merely allowing beginning Beholding the spring…of all seasons We need… We want We call for Whispering each other’s names As if unbelieving… Making certain this is real Hearts pounding in a sea of silence Where beauty holds us still Growing up together...and.... Still Unfinished... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
All that is articulate in us Dew become a shower eternal In moments, voices, words I look into the graciousness of colors Hues Merely allowing beginning Beholding the spring…of all seasons We need… We want We call for Whispering each other’s names As if unbelieving… Making certain this is real Hearts pounding in a sea of silence Where beauty holds us still Growing up together...and.... Still Unfinished... BRAVA!! OUTSTANDING Lee.... I believe, your best ever... I'm keepin it.  The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Fantastic write Lee.. once again I stand, okay sit, in awe of your talent. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmmmmmmmm- lovely - moving - soul speaking- SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
Terrific write! I guess we are all unfinished in nature's never ending cycle of life. I am breathless. quatro |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Lee Magic Dave |
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