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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2004-10-19 07:03 AM


They fix together
Interlocking commencement gifts
Phoning home
To where knees shift
Knowing the apprehension
The danger being brought to the table
In the basement of Frankenstein(s)

Seamlessly, light dims
Like a prehistoric starfish
Night rides the skeleton
Of a Roman Discovery~
On a mix of molecular cameras
With gnarled like censors pinching
A place from the human mind
Traveling the blood
Biotechnological hackers
Stirring self thinkers alive

Tasting something fitting together
Hitch hiking around the circle
Like a high speed saber saw
Scarlet lights stare out to see
Evolution taking shapes
Breathing consequences grasping
Every insult of true nature’s meaning

Textbook chromosomes flash
Finger edges like a flaming monk
Down to the bone, a mother’s eye
Scans rivers of golden like hair
Like a rescue helicopter
With a brain…
Scanning molecular thoughts
Of how thin and intent
Size reduction of
An ocean breeze, droplets
Of a child being born
Swarming like miniature colonies
Artificially intuitive and alive
Changing every instant
A generation all in it’s own


NOTE: this was written about mircotechnology

[This message has been edited by LeeJ (10-19-2004 08:38 AM).]

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babygirlwlove
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since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180
New York City
1 posted 2004-10-19 07:08 AM


wow...this is powerful...sweeping visions and energy!

so much enjoyed...
**babygirL**

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2004-10-19 08:17 AM


weavewobblestir
the mixmistress has blended another
sighshake panorama

coooooooooooooooolstuff ms leeJ

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2004-10-19 08:34 AM


LeeJ
And that about sizes it up. Good morning sweet.

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