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Don_Juan
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since 2004-04-08
Posts 252
Far from where I am going

0 posted 2004-10-18 11:14 PM



featureless faces of foul foreclosures
finding fair amounts of nothing
within weak whispers of the wind
horrible and hostile
argumentative lips of cold steel
scream in part intangible phrases
what exactly do they mean?
mute words fall on deaf ears
orderly and organic growing fruitless
products of never existing convienience
a thousand lidless eyes
rain down tears of nourishment
to an offset obisidan landscape
charred by voices of unworthy egomaniacs
setting autumn fires
off and running across lush plains
home to home thrown
to consuming whirlwinds
for relocation
smoke rises
in skyscrapers
assimilating to clouds
black and unused they dissipate
yeilding helpless sunlight
to an obliterated landscape

(sort a stream of conciousness poem. i hope you enjoy it)

nice use of muffin

© Copyright 2004 John Lervezuk - All Rights Reserved
Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
1 posted 2004-10-18 11:33 PM


The City


You said, ‘I will go to another land, I will go to another sea.
Another city will be found, a better one than this.
Every effort of mine is a condemnation of fate;
and my heart is – like a corpse – buried.
How long will my mind remain in this wasteland.
Wherever I turn my eyes, wherever I may look
I see black ruins of my life here,
where I spent so many years destroying and wasting.’

You will find no new lands, you will find no other seas.
The city will follow you.  You will roam the same
streets.  And you will age in the same neighborhoods;
and you will grow gray in these same houses.
Always you will arrive in this city.  Do not hope for any other---
There is no ship for you, there is no road.
As you have destroyed your life here
in this little corner, you have ruined it in the entire world.


C. P. Cavafy


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