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Member Caelestus
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 10-18-2004 07:31 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Memories & Mists

“Here, sit, play…”

and the invitation to explore
the keys of another’s
comfort zone was both
humbling and disconcerting…

it had been so long since I had played…

and I am not good in putting
fingers to music when practiced,
let alone stiff with time…

but I opened the bench top,
knowing I would find the books
of my own childhood,
and practiced a moment,
first with the right hand,
and then with the left…

but when I went to play,
there in Martie’s room,
I could not make my hands come

and there was no braiding of tune
to fill the air
with notes we both knew so well…

I sat for a moment in the quiet,
Martie and Taylor elsewhere,
Remote singing quietly
in the main room; Needful meowing
outside; Precious inside at my feet…

but I was not alone with just animals.
I was not to be sitting here, I could feel that…

So I got up, put the book back,
walked into the main room where Remote
was singing, and saw then, the why of it;
her mother’s piano was for her mother, alone…
and the mist of love
would always surround only her…

When I returned home, at my own piano,
pulling out the same book as sits within
Martie’s piano bench,
my fingers needed no right hand left hand practice,
but came together, as I felt my own mother’s
hand push gently on my back,
that I should sit up straight, shoulders back,
fingers curled…
allowing the music to float upward…

we both have our Mists,
Martie and I…

And I cherish that we are surrounded
with our loving Memories…

© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-18-2004 07:39 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Awwww, precious you are...and how lovely the memories.  I had thought that we would play a duet together...even chopsticks...maybe next time.  I'm sorry I missed that special moment.  
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2 posted 10-18-2004 07:44 PM       View Profile for James_A_Fraser   Email James_A_Fraser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for James_A_Fraser

The only possible I was certain you would learn in your yes, I know. Thank you for saying so beautifully what I have never been able to express.
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3 posted 10-18-2004 07:52 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Beautiful..I say this through misty eyes.
You have a magical touch.
Heart hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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4 posted 10-18-2004 08:09 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

You must realize that each of us has a
place,  a moment much as your own...and
your words will inspire some to write of
their own as well.  But...will they be
capable of saying it as delicately and
beautifully as these?  Perhaps,  perhaps
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5 posted 10-18-2004 09:09 PM       View Profile for kayjay   Email kayjay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kayjay

Such phrases you find, Karilea, where are they hiding when I look for them.  Well done!  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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6 posted 10-18-2004 09:56 PM       View Profile for NewEnglandlazurlu   Email NewEnglandlazurlu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for NewEnglandlazurlu

Karilea, this brought back memories of my childhood. Today, I could only bang on the keys.

A wonderful, teary-eyed piece.

hugs, Marti

A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows.
–St. Francis of Assisi

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7 posted 10-19-2004 10:17 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I've always regreted never having learned to play a musical instrument, namely piano...I'm sure you play lovely.
How those mists of time surround us all...lovely poem
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8 posted 10-19-2004 10:53 AM       View Profile for miscellanea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miscellanea

   In the year and a half I've been reading poetry anywhere, a poem has never given me goosebumps like this!  I could feel the spirits.  I, too, play piano and could imagine exactly what happened.  Other than water, piano is the medium most spiritual to me.  Probably even moreso than water.  I must keep this.

          Love and Hugs,
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9 posted 10-19-2004 11:11 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit


The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

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10 posted 10-19-2004 05:03 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

liked it
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11 posted 10-19-2004 06:22 PM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise

very much enjoyed
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12 posted 10-19-2004 06:24 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze


Martie and Kari--

"Heart & Soul" indeed.

passing shadows
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13 posted 11-05-2004 09:27 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

I should buy a piano, yeah
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14 posted 11-05-2004 08:45 PM       View Profile for *Alli4000*   Email *Alli4000*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *Alli4000*

I play piano and can relate to parts of this poem.
Beautiful write like always...


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Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

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