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RMW
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0 posted 2004-10-18 05:39 PM


Need

There is a beauty to the expression of need
simply stated. Like a stone hut
when seen from a long way off,
it attracts. Isolated
from the gray confusion out of which it was built
and the direct route to a mountain top experience,
halfway up, or down the slope
it suns itself
openly.

RMW

[This message has been edited by RMW (10-19-2004 11:18 AM).]

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2004-10-18 05:41 PM


ah.. you sir.. indeed are grace...
Enchantress
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2 posted 2004-10-18 07:04 PM


Beautiful...awesome piece of work ..
very much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2004-10-18 07:10 PM


Especially liked the flow of this piece...
Perfectly metered.
TD

Martie
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4 posted 2004-10-18 07:26 PM


Yep...that's exactly right!  
babygirlwlove
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5 posted 2004-10-18 07:27 PM


"There is a beauty to the expression of need
simply stated. "

we are on the same page...Love this...

**babygirL**

RMW
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6 posted 2004-10-19 11:20 AM


Enchantress, TD, Martie and Babygirl ....... Thank you for taking a moment to read and for the kind words. Bob
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7 posted 2004-10-19 11:28 AM




For several reasons,
I am making a keeper
of this...with the
appropriate light
on the shelving in
the library...

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?  Keeping in mind, I must stand close...

vandana
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8 posted 2004-10-19 05:01 PM


enjoyed
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