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Toerag
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0 posted 2004-10-18 02:19 PM


When I was a lad of ten,
I worked all day and saved,
The dollar that I earned,
For a rainy day.

I kept it 'neath my pillow,
And this is God's honest truth,
Woke up the following morning,
My dollar became a tooth!!!

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muted
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1 posted 2004-10-18 02:21 PM


LOL
yeah
you still make me grin and giggle

babygirlwlove
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2 posted 2004-10-18 02:31 PM


lol..silly toe...

much love,
**babygirL**

Mysteria
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3 posted 2004-10-18 02:31 PM


The true Tooth Fairy story

Don't believe one word he says,
He won't tell you the truth I fear.
He only wanted double or nothing... so,
She left him a buck called, Balladeer!


I had to really dig deep for something that stupid too.

Larry C
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4 posted 2004-10-18 03:28 PM


Toe,
Me thinks you'll never be toothless!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Elan
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5 posted 2004-10-18 03:31 PM


Mysteria almost topped
your poem, Toe...

Go grab 'Deer and make him pay..

er, play!

Toerag
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Ala bam a
6 posted 2004-10-18 03:34 PM


Mysteria....and I hate that counterfeit stuff too!!!
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7 posted 2004-10-18 04:17 PM


LOL... You are really on a roll today, aren't you??? *G* Share some of those Wheaties with my snoozing muse, wouldja please? *G*
Earth Angel
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8 posted 2004-10-18 06:28 PM


Oh, Toe, it just wasn't fair. You've been getting the wrong end of the horse since you were just a little boy. What you needed was a fairy to love you.

Dollar Smiley  Tooth


Earth Fairy
Fairy

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
9 posted 2004-10-18 07:00 PM


Did I ever tell ya how funny you are??
WELL YA ARE TOO!!!
Big hugs~

LeeJ
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10 posted 2004-10-19 08:48 AM


awwwww, Toe, here, take one of mine
(she opens mouth and pulls out her dentures)
Take your pick, would be happy to share one with ya, (hoping he doesn't take a front tooth)
hehehhehhe
Good one!

Mary Parry
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11 posted 2004-10-19 11:59 AM


You're priceless!   Just when I needed a good laugh too.

Mary

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