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Open Poetry #33

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2004-10-18 01:08 PM

To my side I hear a sound
of waves upon a hull.

I call.
The fog is thick.
I hear a responding feminine.
Parallel course
through the mists of color.

I wonder
if on this journey
you could see
your being near me?

Just out of sight
but there.

Like you,
I know not where I will, or am,
only
that I must go on.

Would you mind?
I'd like to hear what you see
with all your eyes.

Those woman's words
in a woman's voice
would mean so much.
Often, I fear the scars, of even my own victories.
And I will share
the braveries
I've learned, when your own injuries
dread the dark.

The wind is up.
I stay the wheel.
Through the evening, again I call.

Are you there?
I am here.

Sailing,
sailing.
Perhaps we are going

together home.

[This message has been edited by Huan Yi (10-18-2004 09:02 PM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-10-18 01:42 PM

So beautiful yet in a haunting way..
In case I have not told you, I love your style!
Fantastic piece here!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

2 posted 2004-10-18 02:14 PM

Very nice work

Imagery plus!

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2004-10-18 02:15 PM

"Would you mind?
I like to hear what you see
with all your eyes."

This is why I wake up each day, I loved those lines.

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