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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-10-17 08:05 PM


Summer Vacation Evenings

Oh how I wish I could
return to the days when
my life was simpler.
When the most pressing problem
of my day was whether I
had or had not a pimple.
When my friend would
pick me up for school in
his junky old pickup truck,
and I would spend my summer
vacation evenings trying to
get my very first (edit profanity).

JamesLee
October18
2004

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (10-17-2004 10:51 PM).]

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1 posted 2004-10-17 10:59 PM


right? hugssss....

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Read between the lines
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Earth Angel
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2 posted 2004-10-17 11:22 PM


"(edit profanity)" ~ whatever could that word be?!? lol

Yes, times were simpler then and I felt a wave of nostalgia wash over me as I read your words. However, my memories were somewhat different from yours! lol


EA

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2004-10-19 12:47 PM


Thank you Greeneyes and Earth Angel...I would tell you the word but its not allowed in Disneyland or Open Poetry...much too mature of a word...James
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