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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2004-10-17 01:49 PM





Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (10-17-2004 05:11 PM).]

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DavePage
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1 posted 2004-10-17 01:53 PM


A chasm beckons
Here it's flow

A steam commands
Heat to it's sense

A bath demands
Recompense

Woman under streams
Of cold

Wonder why
Their skin grows old

Alas these words
Could stretch

Too long
Left with nothing

Like an avert's song

Dave

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2 posted 2004-10-17 01:57 PM


Sorry

By the time your images and words downloaded
I had thought and loaded the words to the words I saw

I wrote to your signature
And not afore

Dave

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3 posted 2004-10-18 02:08 PM


Titia, I am thinking it is sheep baby time yes?  Busy, overwhelmed with it all, or hoping so.  This is so NOT you!  Stay well m'friend.  Do you think you can manage a sheep for Michael, and just maybe,
a white one for White Dove this year?

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4 posted 2004-10-18 05:38 PM


mine, too...my world that is

miss reading you, Titia


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5 posted 2004-10-18 10:21 PM


Ah, dear Titia, we all have worlds in which the garbage is mixed right in there with the good. If one can distinuish between the two, then all is well. It's when we get to the point that one can't tell the difference that we have problems..

Big knuffles, dear dutchie

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