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Rodney Belcher
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0 posted 2004-10-16 09:34 AM



When I look into your eyes
I feel the love we share
When I hold your hand
I know you'll always be there
When I smell your soft aroma
My soul is made complete
Thank you
For being my wife
The mother to my children
My best friend ever
My confidant
My lover
But mostly
For being
You

Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod

© Copyright 2004 Rodney Belcher - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-10-16 09:40 AM


that's pretty
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2 posted 2004-10-16 11:00 AM


Such a lovely tribute to your wife
Kahlil
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3 posted 2004-10-16 11:50 AM


RB:
oh so nice, so good...
never stop telling her...

K

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4 posted 2004-10-17 12:24 PM


Nice...James
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5 posted 2004-10-17 12:43 PM


Writing such a beautiful acknowledgement of your love is a priceless gift. It would be lovely to have such a gift in a nice frame, to hang up in your home. Thanks for sharing your poem for Amy with us.
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6 posted 2004-10-17 01:51 AM


"Thank you
For being my wife
The mother to my children
My best friend ever
My confidant
My lover
But mostly
For being
You"


Loved that part, especially the ending.  Beautiful poem.

~Alli~

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