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For Her

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Huan Yi
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0 posted 10-16-2004 08:19 AM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi




In a dream
beyond reason
I held you in my arms

It was the season of feeling

It was autumn
the leaves of the trees
the gold of your hair

The air was cool
your skin warm

Your face
Your eyes
I held you in my arms

It was a dream...
and I was happy

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            
© Copyright 2004 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-16-2004 08:22 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Sounds like a beautiful dream John. Very well done.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

1slick_lady
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in a dream...
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Well done...tightly written
passing shadows
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sometimes that's the only place we find happiness

great write! much enjoyed!
JamesMichael
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5 posted 10-17-2004 12:25 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Dreams can become reality...James
ThisDiamond
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6 posted 10-17-2004 12:28 AM       View Profile for ThisDiamond   Email ThisDiamond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ThisDiamond's Home Page   View IP for ThisDiamond

Welcome to Passions.
Beautiful write.
TD
Susan
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7 posted 10-17-2004 12:44 AM       View Profile for Susan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan

Lovely -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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8 posted 10-17-2004 12:47 AM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

And that's what dreams are for.
Juju
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In your dreams


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Lovely flow.
exhale
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10 posted 10-17-2004 01:19 AM       View Profile for exhale   Email exhale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for exhale

that was absolutely beautiful.
Aenimal
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Well done
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12 posted 10-17-2004 01:57 AM       View Profile for *Alli4000*   Email *Alli4000*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *Alli4000*

John, marvelous poem.  It was such an enjoyment to read.

~Alli~

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Donít cry because itís over, smile because it happened...

Denise
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Beautifully expressed, John.
Drauntz
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tow out of ? "happy poems".

beautiful and warm and pure.
Artic Wind
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lovely

ARCTIC WIND
 
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