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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2004-10-16 08:19 AM

In a dream
beyond reason
I held you in my arms

It was the season of feeling

It was autumn
the leaves of the trees
the gold of your hair

The air was cool
your skin warm

Your face
Your eyes
I held you in my arms

It was a dream...
and I was happy

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-10-16 08:22 AM

Sounds like a beautiful dream John. Very well done.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2004-10-16 08:44 AM

in a dream...

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

3 posted 2004-10-16 09:18 AM

Well done...tightly written

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-10-16 09:43 AM

sometimes that's the only place we find happiness

great write! much enjoyed!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2004-10-17 12:25 PM

Dreams can become reality...James

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2004-10-17 12:28 PM

Welcome to Passions.
Beautiful write.
TD

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

7 posted 2004-10-17 12:44 PM

Lovely -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2004-10-17 12:47 PM

And that's what dreams are for.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

9 posted 2004-10-17 12:52 PM

Lovely flow.

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

10 posted 2004-10-17 01:19 AM

that was absolutely beautiful.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

11 posted 2004-10-17 01:54 AM

Well done

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

12 posted 2004-10-17 01:57 AM

John, marvelous poem. It was such an enjoyment to read.

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

13 posted 2004-10-17 02:49 AM

Beautifully expressed, John.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

14 posted 2007-04-27 04:29 PM

tow out of ? "happy poems".

beautiful and warm and pure.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

15 posted 2007-10-27 05:49 PM

lovely

ARCTIC WIND

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