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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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For people to be so aloof caustic, yet they beg attention feign affection.... their real emotions are kept inside this adolescent character is in accordance with another self kept on undisclosed shelf.... while family and friends fish for something tangible there lacks an essence of sincere contact why bother to get blood from a stone with their real desire comfortably masked there was a time to question where the fire went then to wonder how time has earnestly been spent but with holes riddled in affective spaces abrasive natures line infective routes real communication descends shutes; while false airs are tossed about one may be unhappy about such comportment I'll resign myself to expect much less. from family or friend who pretends to be earnest. Attributes of a generation removed are in play a distance between mannerisms is there to stay. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Removing one's self...seems to go hand-in-hand with "it's not my fault" thinking. Enjoyed the thoughts in this, Martin. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Aptly put Kacy, it has made my blood simmer but it shouldn't since the "it's not my fault " is a convenient game played by so many who invest so little and have the audacity to expect much in return... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
kept on undisclosed shelf.... while family and friends fish for something tangible there lacks an essence of sincere contact why bother to get blood from a stone with their real desire comfortably masked this very subject is one that I run into so often. People who pretend to be one thing and aren't....but wear multiple masks. Very well done, I understand this one all to well. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I see this often too...thanks for sharing. |
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