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Autumn Cascading |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Cascade of rain in Autumn air breath of damp upon my skin sounds of nature everywhere brings soothing to restless within. Colors splashing horizons view leaves tumble in gentle surround artistic touch of palette hues serene quiet, peace is found. All is calm, life holds no worry while scampering to and fro creatures of nature work in hurry while wind of coming changes blow. The rush and hush of mother earth blessing special seasons of birth. The greatest beauty on earth, is found in the hearts of those who love.... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
GS, this is precious... I very much enjoyed the read! *~coco*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Donna... I've marked this a  as it is one of your best, ever! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Your descriptions of Autumn and its feel cascade as pretty as your title. Hugs -  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
serene and soothing write...you carry the hush of the wind in your poetry... **babygirL** |
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Contabo Member
since 2001-11-21
Posts 159 |
Autumn is DEFINITELY in the air. Contabo |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Donna, dear lady....I do love the feel of these words...such peace...thank you. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Donna Your words paint a most beautiful picture of my favourite season. I hope all is well in your life. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Colors splashing horizons view leaves tumble in gentle surround artistic touch of palette hues serene quiet, peace is found. This is a peaceful beauty dear Donna, as always I find warmth and comfort in your poetry. Hugs~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you have got the spirit, for sure! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The colors of Autumn always hold such beauty for the beholder. It's hard not to be inspired by the sights and sounds. Thanks to all, luv and hugs........... The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentlestOne~ 'wind of coming changes blow' I just love the sound of that ... applicable to many things~ Thank you for being such a gracious poetess~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I especially enjoyed the line about the touch of the autumn rain. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Tranquil and calming. A lovely write from a lovely Spirit. A gentle write from a Gentle soul. Even the title is poetic! May your autumn be a glorious one! Warm, autumnal hugs, Linda  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Donna, Autumn just happens to be my favotire season and you do it justice with your words Lovely |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Absolutely charming write! Love, Margherita |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Donna, I am blown away by this piece. One delightful bit of writing. Thank you so much for such an enjoyable read. hugs, Marti A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows. |
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