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LucidityNow
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0 posted 2004-10-14 11:55 AM


This poem was written in response to a poem written by my soulmate, it will be many months before we even see eachother.


Epic Grand Quest

A tortured soul screams for thee
With sounds that are meant to be seen
Bridges built ethereal, I seek
Through darkened infinity
Flash, blood, heart & soul calls out to me
Barriars, but with no blocking walls
Two souls so alike gaze
Linked with speed unheard
Energies coliding in poise
Trancending space and time
   and waiting
In unbearable patience
Love blossoms


and i'm certain that if i drive into those trees, it would make less of a mess, than she's made of me...

© Copyright 2004 Jesse Wintonyk - All Rights Reserved
LucidityNow
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since 2001-02-06
Posts 118
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1 posted 2004-10-14 11:57 AM


this was in reply to a poem she wrote that went like this -

The gift of sight, Perception unfolds
Truth received through voices of old
Blazing power beyond compare
Hold so strong lovingly Mighty
Boundless captivity a hell of my own design
Glorious Sensuous, Urged by desire
So real words do not render
Pure evil with secrets you will find in me
flash blood heart & soul
These are but all I have to bestow
Cradled in life two souls so alike
Burning in your fire of awakening
A tortured soul screams for thee

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2004-10-14 07:42 PM


Nice writing...James
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