navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #33 » Loaning Voice
Open Poetry #33
Post A Reply Post New Topic Loaning Voice Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2004-10-14 09:23 AM


Ocean, live in concert, to slow moons
Neath bright night chasing dawn
But of mysterious things
Where the heart sings
Calling to madmen

      In rainbow adornment, rejecting the entice of fabric values

Fingers tracing cathedral door ways
Garlands of ivy looking through
Secret soul of self to hold
Where children romp and chew
The moods of living
Unleashing spiritualists

       We hear the sound of October’s maybe

Oh philosopher with irrelevant names
The lady takes an armful of spirit
From which imagination draws dawn
Subtlest perfumes enormously literate
Containing another man’s love thoughts

        We are mixed thoughts of someone?

Fermented pleasures drink my soul
Flames of lustful vertigo
Laden with preparation codes
Of the best intentions
Which has taken my mind
Aloof and fresh, air brushing the stranger
Who listens now?
We become the guests of home
With a course of connection to whole

     We are the visitors….of moments

Like a promenade of colorful greens
Senses increased with age
Scarlet blues and wide eyed roses
In breathless spells of intuitive forces
Gives motive for a guiding light
Ingested within the mind’s Hines sight?

     Elements of even breath of sacred birds

Kissing heaven’s enchanted warm skin
Behold as silvery waters become
Light to the seers of wisdom
Where I’ve always been a wealthy woman

This poem was written in honor to my family
Son, daughter in law, grand-daughter and the many people who have been instrumental in bringing me snuggly into today, including many of the PIP poets who have loaned their voice!

Thank you


© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
1 posted 2004-10-14 09:30 AM


your family ribbons
tied together
with love hands

God hears the silk of your heart

lovely work lady Lee J

babygirlwlove
Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180
New York City
2 posted 2004-10-14 09:43 AM


"Fermented pleasures drink my soul"

wow..outstanding imagery here...

**babygirL**

Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
3 posted 2004-10-14 12:36 PM


LeeJ

"The lady takes an armful of spirit
From which imagination draws dawn
Subtlest perfumes enormously literate"

You are these things and more in tunes, with voices and visions that amaze the blue rooms!



Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
4 posted 2004-10-14 03:40 PM


Incredible writing and so much depth!  
Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
5 posted 2004-10-14 06:42 PM


We are so influenced by those about us, who gift us parts of themselves which become a part of us.  I so love your words and the beauty you weave with them with your talent- Enjoyed-

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #33 » Loaning Voice

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary