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Alicethruglass
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0 posted 2004-10-13 05:42 PM


Mirrored Truth


It's true,
I link to you daily
my morning breath needing warmth
as the season removes my protective covering,
and I am untitled in the challenge of each day.

I turn down the covers each night,
placing my memories where they belong
where regrets are none
and dreams await the poetry
that lies in my heart.

I find my way through the darkness
blinded only by the touch of once
and the restless spirit
that flees my words before me
swirling them to trance me
into sleep.

~~*~~

The mirror never lies~~
and your reflection is always with me
caught in the truth
and the nakedness that belongs
to only me.

~A~

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-10-13 07:31 PM


quote:
...and I am untitled in the challenge of each day.

~~*~~

The mirror never lies~~...


~*~

I have missed your writing.  It is good to have constant connection with my favorite writers, once again.

Thank you for this lovely!

Dark Angel
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2 posted 2004-10-17 05:26 PM


We need to read more of you ~A~

Wunerful, absolutely.

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

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3 posted 2004-10-17 09:02 PM


"The mirror never lies~~
and your reflection is always with me
caught in the truth
and the nakedness that belongs
to only me."


inspiring
you always urge the emotions out of me...

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2004-10-17 09:10 PM


I found this particularly moving.

a sad reflection of relections...

thanks for sharing


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