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Venus Dances

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Susan
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walking the surreal


0 posted 10-13-2004 04:16 PM       View Profile for Susan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Susan


in the early hours of morn
as sky is lightly kissed
by merest hint of sun
Venus dances upon twilight floor

crescent moon smiles
shining his fervent ardor
at the pleasure
she gifts to him

s.a.t.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

© Copyright 2004 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 10-13-2004 04:20 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Ahhh yes not only to him, but to us.

Beautifully captured Susan

Maree

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 10-13-2004 04:22 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Susan~
I knew from the title that I was being invited into a beautiful piece~
I was right~
This is just so very lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


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Excellent write Susan...beautiful indeed.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion


4 posted 10-13-2004 04:28 PM       View Profile for Snowflake From Hell   Email Snowflake From Hell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Snowflake From Hell

yes i agree with nancy

One cannot see what lies within if one does not see the obvious

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 10-13-2004 06:33 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms susan
a duet of doves
yours and Mr B's
enjoyed this
too kewl
Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 10-13-2004 06:41 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

A beautiful dance to behold Susan
well done gal.
Susan
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7 posted 10-13-2004 06:55 PM       View Profile for Susan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan

Thank you all kindly.  When I drive to work in the wee hours of the morning, the sun just beginning to light the sky, the moon hangs in crescent as if a smile and venus is bright in her star shimmers - it is most lovely -

Hugs all- Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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Gaia


8 posted 10-13-2004 07:23 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

How beautiful!
Kahlil
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mmm this is dreamlike...
nice...

K
JamesMichael
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10 posted 10-14-2004 12:25 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Enjoyed...James
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song


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Photographed in words perfectly.  Much enjoyed the scene.
Susan Caldwell
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12 posted 10-14-2004 07:46 AM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

beautifully captured...

but that is no surprise coming from you.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Susan
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13 posted 10-14-2004 10:43 AM       View Profile for Susan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan

You are all most kind in your words and heart- thank you and good morning to all-

Hugs - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

yv
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14 posted 11-12-2004 07:06 PM       View Profile for yv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for yv

Miss Susan (Mrs. or Ms. as you like it), that was so romantically delicious.  My every sense is hieghtened by this piece.  Much love.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

passing shadows
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displaced


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precious
Susan
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Thank you YV - and PS - and just Susan is fine - thank you

Hugs - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

 
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