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Venus Dances |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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in the early hours of morn as sky is lightly kissed by merest hint of sun Venus dances upon twilight floor crescent moon smiles shining his fervent ardor at the pleasure she gifts to him s.a.t. Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ahhh yes not only to him, but to us. Beautifully captured Susan Maree  cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Susan~ I knew from the title that I was being invited into a beautiful piece~ I was right~ This is just so very lovely~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Susan...beautiful indeed. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
yes i agree with nancy One cannot see what lies within if one does not see the obvious |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms susan a duet of doves yours and Mr B's enjoyed this too kewl |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A beautiful dance to behold Susan well done gal. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you all kindly. When I drive to work in the wee hours of the morning, the sun just beginning to light the sky, the moon hangs in crescent as if a smile and venus is bright in her star shimmers - it is most lovely - Hugs all- Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
How beautiful! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
mmm this is dreamlike... nice... K |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Photographed in words perfectly. Much enjoyed the scene. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
beautifully captured... but that is no surprise coming from you. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
You are all most kind in your words and heart- thank you and good morning to all- Hugs - SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Miss Susan (Mrs. or Ms. as you like it), that was so romantically delicious. My every sense is hieghtened by this piece. Much love. Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
precious |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you YV - and PS - and just Susan is fine - thank you  Hugs - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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