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Silent Storm |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I can feel it brewing this storm of emotion residing within, high's meeting lows a cold front dwelling, hanging in stillness surrounding self.... through thunder heard is only silence Speaking your name to open spaces turbulent skies dissipate all sounds I reach to touch the essence of you {only wind feels me} softly beckoning to the gentleness of your soul... Ominous is this storm sending rain through my soul No one hears me cry. The greatest beauty on earth, is found in the hearts of those who love.... |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Donna, Have you ever thought about becoming a Weather Girl? Just kidding. You write the brew before of the storming heart very, very well! Thanks, Gentle Spirit. miscellanea |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I reach to touch the essence of you {only wind feels me} softly beckoning to the gentleness of your soul... Ominous is this storm sending rain through my soul No one hears me cry." Such a beautiful ache to this Donna.... Extremely well written. Love ya lady~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
negitive and positive energy....remember they combat each other, and we can indeed will the negative to dissolve Loved this....emmensly! |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
"Ominous is this storm sending rain through my soul No one hears me cry" ...howls from deep inside the soul... awesome poem, **babygirL** |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Oh Donna - hugs to you - this is moving, it is lovely, and I so understand its depths - your talent is shining.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Donna~ This was so sad and yet so beautiful. Wistful... "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
My thanks to each of you for your kind comments and time. Peace to all. Good morning. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I reach to touch the essence of you {only wind feels me} ~*~ Ah...yes... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked this a lot  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Kari, Vandanna, thanks so very much. HUGS |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
beautiful painful moving me here..... *sigh* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Donna, you are truly developing into a very fine poetess!  This was an exceptionally mature piece of writing. I felt it to the very core of me. Love & Light, Linda |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Sad yet beautifully expressed Donna , I understand this emotional brew .... its what I am going through Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and you know I understand |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentlestSpirit~ feeling ... just feeling~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You are all so gracious with your replies and touch my heart with your words... thank you....each.... The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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