Swing Dreams (Poem of Music #2)

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Swing Dreams (Poem of Music #2)

Don_Juan
Member

since 2004-04-08

Posts 252
Far from where I am going

0 posted 2004-10-11 10:49 PM

Blaring horns on
off-beat rhythms
acoustic bass
strummed foot taps
toms highlight
as cymbal fills the air
saxophone melodies
upon allegro waves
carry out a
confident voice
upon ears long past
upbeat, off and around beat groove
plays among birds of chorus
zoot suits riot
among a sea
of twirling partners
congas to bongos
flavorful and free
lay down seperat basslines
intertwining, combining
culminating to perform
behind fatigues brows.

nice use of muffin

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

1 posted 2004-10-12 09:33 AM

Yeah, it was a zoot suit riot...(snaps fingers)
I can see this picture and feel the energy...
all those swingers and a crooner with a large-band, yeah!

Thanks!
K

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2004-10-12 10:29 AM

Nice tempo, DJ

and lovin that sax

babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

3 posted 2004-10-12 10:31 AM

ooooooooo feeling the jazz rhythms in this...niiice...

**babygirL**

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