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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-10-11 05:50 PM


Oldies


"Don't they know it's the end of the world"
when.....

Some days it just doesn't pay to exist
as those words of old play loudly
drowning out my other thoughts
while taking the long, tiring drive home.

Devalued, deflated Mondays
only bring me to Tuesdays
and a block of hours
to sleep off the depreciation.

I am a "yes" person ( most of the time)
probably not  when it matters the most
but basically will give you the shirt off my back
and sometimes more.

I wonder though, why I don't fit
into today's world and
knowing there is no turning back in time
where do I go from here...


M

*thinking too much

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
1 posted 2004-10-11 05:54 PM


HeyGirlieGirl~
You could always come to FLORIDA~

LOVE THIS THOUGHT -

'Devalued, deflated Mondays
only bring me to Tuesdays
and a block of hours
to sleep off the depreciation.'


You matter to me ... yeppers, ya' shore do~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2004-10-11 07:00 PM


I know this feeling....
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-10-11 09:12 PM


M, I think we need to meet and go shopping..
either that or I'll buy you a drink.
Heart hugs.

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

MyHeartofShadows
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since 2004-09-04
Posts 88
Hyattsville, MD
4 posted 2004-10-11 09:14 PM


I’m a fan of the oldies, being one myself (so I’m told), but Mondays are very wearing to me also.  Hope you get rested and face work Tuesday with a pretty smile.  Where I would love to receive your shirt, your words lighten the mood of Monday knowing there are still those type out there.  Don’t fit, be you through and through.
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