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Rose on my Cheek
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Rose on my Cheek |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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But of secrets Mine to musk Getting lost within Showing off states of feeling To the soul which manifests Lips of beauty, thirsty ones Patriots of a timeless sweet land Like natures oneness Molder of form…elixir, climbing puffs of foolish Participating in a B&B Seeking no profit Only God’s fragrance In your face Simple lives sharing bread Ignoring war Locked doors search for an apology We start fires, taking notes Affirming mental state Voice becomes a fountain of youth Pulling on the hip of life Is where my secrets sing lovely Down to the sea On murmuring rose cheeked Wine…where the flowers speak And I am forever blind…….. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Voice becomes a fountain of youth Pulling on the hip of life Is where my secrets sing lovely BEAUTIFUL Lee! |
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zippi Member
since 2004-03-31
Posts 56California |
Hello Lee J Seems like a lifetime since we've talked. I haven't written or read anything for months and so I read this... And you are still my favorite poet. This is astounding, moving, captivating. Love Ya Rene` |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Locked doors search for an apology We start fires, taking notes Affirming mental state Voice becomes a fountain of youth Pulling on the hip of life Is where my secrets sing lovely Down to the sea On murmuring rose cheeked Wine…where the flowers speak And I am forever blind…….." Just a fantastic write Lee! Love ya lady~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Full of inner meaning Dave |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ This is just plain purtimous~  Well ... it is !!! 'Locked doors search for an apology' Oh my ... this line is mine for the keeping~  Say it's so ... oh pretty pweeeeese~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Only have time for a little reading today. Lee, these lines: "Only God’s fragrance In your face" alone were worth the read. And your closing....well....it doesn't get much better than that. I've missed being here and don't have much explanation of why I'm not except to say I'm going through some changes. Love ya, jo |
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