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Open Poetry #33

desert heat ps

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-10-11 08:23 AM

butterflys were iron
without wings
and a hundred ovens
touched their shimmer sides

I talked to the tan skin
in her leather thighs
she said my eyes were welcome
and she liked my hands

how they came with fingers
big enough to know her name
when she was leaning forward
pushing wind into water

the other mother too
said she approved
debauchery in tandom
and she would bring the screams

if there were three days in tomorrow

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Dark

scribble note..before this gets sent to mature..(wink) it is just a murdercycle show in palm springs with some hell-thy power machines that just begged the darkster to dance em for a squint eye glide or two..

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-10-11 09:00 AM

hmmmm, standing here rubbing my chin..even with your notes, which I so love, me thinks this has deeper meaning, even if not intended
this could indeed have a duel meaning...

Good one...hope the bike exhibit was invigorating to the possiblity of creativity...going beyond the imagination, which so invigorates!\

smiles and hugs

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-10-11 09:55 AM

Sounds purrrrrrfectly delightful, all those gas powered bicycles -

And yummie.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-10-11 10:54 AM

Let the engines roar...

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2004-10-11 04:36 PM

'three days in tomorrow' ---now that's a line! I like this one and I love that last line.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

5 posted 2004-10-11 05:33 PM

sure know how to maove the mind, Dark...

**babygirL**

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