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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2004-10-10 06:55 PM



The day was spelling
In the synergy that flowed beneath our boat, a tales telling
Just barely on the surfaces of fragile tongues
When all my eyes could veil but the feelings inside me

And words fought actions in confusing myth
Never touching the water…yet we were…undeniably wet
Sprayed by October rains, and tender tears of vacant years
And the day was perfect in its weep and flitter, intermittent drab and glitter

As we stepped around the real feel
The wind colder, we stopped to navigate the scale from skate
As passers by assumed us to be we, a picture of twin harmony
That I could not remain within the confines of a warming seat

To leave you in the wind preparing skim, fillet of dinner all and in
Astir, that brought me into focus as it were, so well a shadow for your shell
That moved us both together, as my body braced the weather from your back
I could feel the knowing glowing all throughout you…all about you

Every molecule was fused in conversations rations lacked
As the warm of me found refuge all along your manly shape
Opening my arms to winter wear the warmth of summers cape
And I floated there in touching, yet not touching

Breathing, in the wonder said of nothing
In it’s silence much too bold to be ignored
Shaken in your soul of every tuned and noted chord
That my mind roamed into open fields of you

The blue-eyed blooms renew
A resonance without a clue
That warms my life the inside through

Copyright Kkh 10/10/04

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2004-10-11 08:08 AM


That my mind roamed into open fields of you

The blue-eyed blooms renew
A resonance without a clue
That warms my life the inside through

o,those blue eyed blooms resonate through the seasons once you've seen them through your own eyes

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2004-10-11 10:07 AM


Kathleen~
Oh my ... what utter beauty~

'And words fought actions in confusing myth
Never touching the water…yet we were…undeniably wet
Sprayed by October rains, and tender tears of vacant years
And the day was perfect in its weep and flitter, intermittent drab and glitter'


AND THIS ....

'Breathing, in the wonder said of nothing'

*sighs*  *sighs*

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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LeeJ
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3 posted 2004-10-11 10:52 AM


simply lovely...enjoyable read
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4 posted 2004-10-11 02:25 PM


I enjoyed this very much. Thanks for sharing it with us

and then He created the horse...

passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-10-11 07:34 PM


thanks for sharing this world you see
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6 posted 2004-10-11 07:54 PM


Ah so beautiful Kathleen....splendid!
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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