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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
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Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-10-10 04:25 PM


maybe by not caring
makes us closer to life as we should know it,
an apathy filled world
a glimpse into the future.
you tell me the world needs me
my family needs me
you need me.
i laugh.
the ground speeds out from underneath my feet
as i fall into destiny.
i'll cry the river to help you drown your sorrows
if you bury me in the depths of your soul.

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aujussy wolf
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since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215
Michigan
1 posted 2004-10-10 09:42 PM


strong write , trust in yourself
and remember to exhale lol
~w

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state
2 posted 2004-10-11 12:58 PM


some future if it's already been mapped  out...good write


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