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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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there was duct tape on my mouth only the wind could carry my voice perhaps you fetched a bottle from the ocean of our distance and read of my love words with your finger ends I dug for dreams there in the night sky and precious metals were shimmer song voices I molded them into my wants and did you extend your wrist did you say let me wear them let me dance with my hands over my shadow's mind and brush his beard with the ends of my desire let me bring him peace with the sides of my sighs or was that another woman that stepped from another lady and danced another dance for another lover did she wear some other jewelry than what I made from my dreams ____________Dark |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Just when I thought I knew where it was headed, you turn 180 and add this *************** with the sides of my sighs or was that another woman that stepped from another lady and danced another dance for another lover did she wear some other jewelry than what I made from my dreams ***************** VERY COOL!! I always enjoy you pennings as they have your unique style and twist. This was no exception and a pleasure to read. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What can one say when Mark said it so very well? Brava! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my!! This is wonderful! Fantastic write Dark! Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Fantastico! as always  Mxx cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Hmmmm - this one makes one think, and I've decided *she* must have danced for *your* dreams -  Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. [This message has been edited by Susan (10-10-2004 07:58 PM).] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Some times you can make a dream what you want, and other times the dream makes you.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thanks to you all, it is a treat to be read by you..and to have you spend even a moment contimplating my scribbles...Again I thank you |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
harsh, dark seduction...nahhhhh..just glad to see you...lol **babygirL** |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sometimes it just all comes together (and then it doesn't) gather the rose petals |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well, I'm going deeper with this one...and perhaps, I'm missing the entire idea which you have projected...but.... with every moment, there is constant change, within us...around us...hopefully we grow older and wiser? smiles...but the thought that this one projected is this... She is and was, as we all our, multiples of feelings...emotions...and so the lady was the person of your dreams, but within herself...she was others to, that you probably couldn't see at the time...lets face it, if love were perfect...we'd have a lot less divorce rate. hehe...but unfortuately when two people meet, love "is" blind...and when we wake up, all of a sudden, we go...opps...who is this person I've been so very intimate with? Who is this person I shared self with? Is this person responsible enough to value my needs...desires...we don't seem to take enough time to evaluate this, before. And love must be mutual, in emotions, feelings, beliefs or there will be troubles. Love must be tendered and realized communication, and a genuine ability to give as well as take? I'll shut up now... Well, anyway...thanks for evoking these thoughts and for your always genious words. Hugs |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thanks again to all of you for your eyes...and ms Lee J... lovers touch with thoughts hoping the other can feel them and will wear them like diamonds (short version) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well done |
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