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Life is...

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~K~
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0 posted 10-10-2004 07:07 AM       View Profile for ~K~   Email ~K~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ~K~


...upon us

It is Now
happening
over & over

we pretend
the future's
coming

when it is
(in fact)
all around us
© Copyright 2004 ~K~ - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 10-10-2004 07:14 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

oh indeed... and I hear its hum as well.

Great to read you.

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

~K~
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2 posted 10-10-2004 07:23 AM       View Profile for ~K~   Email ~K~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~K~

It hums
it comes undone
it make believes
a brighter tomorrow
it is sorrows
distant cousin
it is the infestation
at a cellular level
that never proves to
be distatseful
in the eyes
of God.
Dark Angel
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and only
in the eyes
of god
we shall see it

its ugliness
all-embracing
coming to ground
victorious

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

Margherita
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Eternity


4 posted 10-10-2004 08:47 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

The moment holds it all, yes.

Beautiful dialogue between you and Dark Angel.

Love, Margherita
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 10-10-2004 09:24 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

~K~
Nodding in understanding here~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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wranx
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A nod and a bump
littlewing
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7 posted 10-11-2004 04:35 PM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

definitely . . .
keep it going . . .
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


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Wonderful...excellent!!!
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

passing shadows
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displaced


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excellent!
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space


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l@ved the second act, how about a third?
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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving


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RMW
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This is very nicely done.
passing shadows
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very cool
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14 posted 11-05-2004 09:02 PM       View Profile for *Alli4000*   Email *Alli4000*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *Alli4000*

~K~, this is beautiful!!

~Alli~

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