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in the middle of you is a garden

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Snow
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"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

[This message has been edited by Snow (10-09-2004 10:24 PM).]

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 10-09-2004 09:18 PM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

this is a beauitful write!
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2 posted 10-09-2004 09:30 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Wow!

Absolutely love this...i'm keeping it.

Maree

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

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3 posted 10-09-2004 10:00 PM       View Profile for EvocativeVerse2   Email EvocativeVerse2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EvocativeVerse2

Hello sweetie. I absolutely love this piece. I popped in to check to see if anyone had posted thoughts about my newest poem and here I am delighted to see two new verses from thee. Of the two this one is my favorite. Bravo! I hope you are feeling better!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

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awesome!
klm
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beautiful.

kenneth

The true poet writes to express, not impress.

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6 posted 10-10-2004 01:55 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

I hope you don't mind, but I read your poem to a friend tonight, and then she wrote her own...

We found it inspiring, snow.

"in the middle of you is a garden"

Yep.

They called it "Eden."



nice
froggy
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Beautiful read Snow.
The picture as well is beautiful.

:-)
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Beautiful beautiful beautiful!!!!!!!

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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(sigh)

why do i stay away for sooo long??

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10 posted 10-10-2004 08:01 PM       View Profile for aujussy wolf   Email aujussy wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aujussy wolf

mmmmmmmm  mmmmmm good
JamesMichael
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Nice...James
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indeed,there is always a garden in each of us...i rarely go there now, though... maybe i should
yv
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Elegant as the sunrise, I truly must say.  I loved this read.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

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