in the middle of you is a garden

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Snow

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since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-10-09 09:13 PM

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

[This message has been edited by Snow (10-09-2004 10:24 PM).]

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2004-10-09 09:18 PM

this is a beauitful write!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2004-10-09 09:30 PM

Wow!

Absolutely love this...i'm keeping it.

Maree

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

3 posted 2004-10-09 10:00 PM

Hello sweetie. I absolutely love this piece. I popped in to check to see if anyone had posted thoughts about my newest poem and here I am delighted to see two new verses from thee. Of the two this one is my favorite. Bravo! I hope you are feeling better!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-10-09 10:15 PM

awesome!

klm
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 58
New Orleans, Atlanta

5 posted 2004-10-10 12:59 PM

beautiful.

kenneth

The true poet writes to express, not impress.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2004-10-10 01:55 AM

I hope you don't mind, but I read your poem to a friend tonight, and then she wrote her own...

We found it inspiring, snow.

"in the middle of you is a garden"

Yep.

They called it "Eden."

nice

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

7 posted 2004-10-10 11:13 AM

Beautiful read Snow.
The picture as well is beautiful.

:-)

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2004-10-10 11:30 AM

Beautiful beautiful beautiful!!!!!!!

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

CMGrimm
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since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

9 posted 2004-10-10 07:38 PM

(sigh)

why do i stay away for sooo long??

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

aujussy wolf

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since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

10 posted 2004-10-10 08:01 PM

mmmmmmmm mmmmmm good

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2004-10-14 07:14 PM

Nice...James

J.Samm
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since 2004-01-12

Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines

12 posted 2004-10-14 10:25 PM

indeed,there is always a garden in each of us...i rarely go there now, though... maybe i should

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

13 posted 2004-11-12 07:05 PM

Elegant as the sunrise, I truly must say. I loved this read.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

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