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soul drifter
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since 2004-09-08
Posts 711
Colorado

0 posted 2004-10-09 08:20 PM


To be in love with you

soft pink fingers
hidden in the dawn lit snow
living behind your brown eyes
I wanna be

soft dark hair
watch the light as it glows
into the depths of my eyes
I need to be
inside you

wishful thinking
that I can live with you
that I can dedicate October dew
see the sunrays play
in the space between our breath
it's so cold I'm trembling
I'd like to be
in love with you

sorrowful full moon
falling over me at night
living behind my vacant smile
it's important for me to be
in love with you

soft pink lips
finding me out
pulling me into the light
it's all I can see

it's all I can do
to be in love with you

sighing in the wind
losing the sound of you
cupped in my hands
lighting a cigarette
cradling your face
publishing my soul
on the low clouds
to breath inside you

it's all I can do
to be in love with you

"Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey

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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2004-10-09 09:02 PM


quote:
cradling your face
publishing my soul
on the low clouds
to breath inside you


Very beautiful lines.  A nice flow that comes from being in love.

Love, Margherita

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-10-09 09:37 PM


Mmmm, yes - and Margherita picked my favorites too -

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2004-10-09 10:13 PM


good write
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