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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-10-09 01:02 AM


Worthy to Miss

After awhile you don't miss
those that you miss as much
as you would sometimes wish.
You develop an attitude of
"I'll see you when I see you."
Until then, why worry about it.
They'll still be there, wherever
they are, doing whatever they
wanted to do, without you.
The same goes for you,
you'll be where you're at,
doing what you want to do.
You'll just be doing it without them.
In the process you'll begin to
understand how much you care for them.
If you can't wait to kiss someone else,
obviously the feelings were thin,
but if you continue to yearn for
only your sweethearts kiss, now
there's a woman worthy to miss.

JamesLee
October07
2004

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2004-10-09 01:04 AM


....now there's a woman worthy to miss!

oh I like this very much - your writing creates very clear images and brings life to the page Bello!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce

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Riding
2 posted 2004-10-09 02:34 AM


Loved this... and it's so true

and then He created the horse...

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-10-09 03:43 AM


so true!
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