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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-10-08 10:11 PM

At the center of joy, lies the deepest of sorrow
In its golden display dawns the birth of tomorrow

As the highest of peaks cored the chasms of fire
In the height of the sameness, but the depths of desire

In the lightness of spirit chained by foot heavy cinch
To weight down the bright sound in the pounds per square inch

Yet the purpose deployed is pure genius employed
That the heart soars at risk should the ground be destroyed

On a lifeline of trust, the indelible must
Meant to capture, enrapture and protect from the rust

With each breath buoyed in, then will ever begin
A true joy that is light as the heart is held in

Copyright Kkh 10/08/04

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-10-09 04:26 AM

very pretty

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2004-10-09 10:14 AM

agreed, very pretty

and then He created the horse...

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-10-09 11:02 AM

Wise words- lovely written-

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2004-10-09 12:28 PM

nice feel to this

love the phrase "indelible must"

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2004-10-10 09:28 AM

quote:

With each breath buoyed in, then will ever begin
A true joy that is light as the heart is held in

Beautiful and so true.
Love, Margherita

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

6 posted 2004-10-10 01:49 PM

I'll just say awesome and leave it at that.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2004-10-10 02:12 PM

Beautiful as is everything you put to paper.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

8 posted 2004-10-10 05:20 PM

bravo td
sweet as always
~J

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2004-10-10 06:08 PM

TD

Yes, your words are wise, as well as beautiful. Always a pleasure to read you!

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

10 posted 2004-10-10 06:17 PM

Very, very nice. Enjoyed this poem.

babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

11 posted 2004-10-12 11:48 AM

lyrical and lovely verse!

**babygirL**

elfin_tigress
Member

since 2002-05-15

Posts 101
Someplace

12 posted 2004-10-12 12:31 PM

Very clever. I especially like the use of rhyme within lines...
"Yet the purpose deployed is pure genius employed"
I enjoyed this wonderful poem very much!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

13 posted 2004-10-12 01:09 PM

wonderfully written and expressed...a joy to read, brilliant!

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