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Being Wind
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Being Wind |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Being Wind “Sometimes you are the wind,” you told me once, and so I wish; I want the things the wind wants, to do the things the wind does. I want to ruffle your hair, tease up your skirt a bit... to press my lips and blow a warm spot just...there... and there....and later, there... I want to turn your cheeks all pink and bring you things, sand, feathers, dandelion seeds like singular snowflakes.... And I want, so want to blow myself out to wherever you are, I mean any time, anywhere, anywhere at all.... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jamie To be the wind...I would like that too! I love the idea.  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
this is a lovely write - oh how lucky is the wind!  Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I want to turn your cheeks all pink and bring you things, sand, feathers, dandelion seeds like singular snowflakes.... And I want, so want to blow myself out to wherever you are, I mean any time, anywhere, anywhere at all.... ================================ very very cool write of theme.... this is one of those poems that makes the reader say iwishihadwrotethis!! I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I want to turn your cheeks all pink and bring you things, sand, feathers, dandelion seeds like singular snowflakes.... And I want, so want to blow myself out to wherever you are, I mean any time, anywhere, anywhere at all.... Yup Janet Marie is right, this is one of those "IWIHWT" poems. Wonderful work James. it's a  Maree cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
This is wonderful - stirring, like the wind. SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jaime~ You blow soft poetic thoughts mt way~ I feel the winded breath of you circling~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I want to ruffle your hair, tease up your skirt a bit... to press my lips and blow a warm spot just...there... and there....and later, there... I want to turn your cheeks all pink and bring you things, sand, feathers, dandelion seeds like singular snowflakes.... And I want, so want to blow myself out to wherever you are, I mean any time, anywhere, anywhere at all.... You write love with such exquisite tenderness. *S* Beautiful work! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Such a soft, yearning bit of wind... I, too, wish I had written this... |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
teasing and lighthearted...lovely.. **babygirL** |
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