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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Over and over the child wails to buy a favorite boat with sail again the mother says not today money is hard earned, she'd say... Well the child grew up discontented the neighbour made him feel neglected they had a real model train set and cars his cheaper version fed an inbred aversion.. at home he'd continue to compare his lot the cheaper model wasn't fair on the spot he had to accept not all boys are equal in later life that led him to a sequel... money is hard earned in various ways lack of adult toys causes much dismay when possessions are constantly compared it takes time away from constructive affairs.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very good words here...great message |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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I especially like this as I've been reading classic symbolism in dream interpretation, by both Freud and Jung. A Runaway train is always a hint to slow down methinks, and consider that with your message, I think it nicely positive, e.  |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Interesting interpretation, I've had at least one train dream where I wake up with the urge of catching up to the caboose at it moves away from view... |
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