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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-10-07 08:33 AM



as the cold settles in
and the chill takes effect
the briskness of thought
begins to collect

as the moments' forgot
bring on the neglect
there is nothing but empty
no dots to connect

as the days linger on
as if nights never left
the excess emotions
are graved in their theft

the dancing is done
no more satin and lace
the bathed in tomorrows'
all gone, with no trace...


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2004 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-10-07 08:38 AM


M, this flowed nicely down the page
and left me wanting to send you a hug.

Well done.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2004-10-07 11:51 AM


understanding this well


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