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Painting with the Mind
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Painting with the Mind |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
One wish fluted pink within its shimmer Clean and new intoxication’s gentle glimmer Bathing blood in opal clouds Delight expounds desires simmer White the Johnny jump up carpet blooms Sensitive the thin skinned crocus swoons This once, succumbed a feeling in a solar breath Making note the way to wear my heart yet scared to death And laughter’s echo trims the deep green romp Summoning in hidden thicket, flourishing in moistened swamp The air grows thin, dizzied out then in Lemon reasons marigold treasons starch and stomp In silken looks upon the opiate of summer’s flower Bending to the touch so slowly motioned every hour Tenderly exploring just beneath the lace of white Beaming to perfection every charter taken flight Sweet the afterglow of gardens given name Crystal clear the colors deepen given wild to tame Lily brushed the canvas plays your body of a splendid light Appeals my eyes the satin blue of every star struck night Copyright Kkh 10/06/04 |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"The air grows thin, dizzied out then in Lemon reasons marigold treasons starch and stomp" I like the whole poem, but that was my favorite. Nice imagery, interesting ponderings. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I am clueless where you come up with such descriptive lines, so much imagery, a most vivid painting...nicely done kiddo. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ 'One wish fluted pink within its shimmer' You opened with a 'killer' line ... and it just got better and better~ Your word-palette is rich with the colors of romantic thoughts dear poetess~ *sigh* *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen, I know I've told you many times, but I do love your writing, Lady. Your poems are always written with perfection.  Hugs, Ethel |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you've painted lovely emotions here all good ones... thank you! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now this is poetry. Unique expressions loaded down in some really awesome lines. ********************** "One wish fluted pink within its shimmer" "White the Johnny jump up carpet blooms Sensitive the thin skinned crocus swoons" "This once, succumbed a feeling in a solar breath" "Lemon reasons marigold treasons starch and stomp" "Lily brushed the canvas plays your body of a splendid light Appeals my eyes the satin blue of every star struck night" ********************** Love the metaphors, the use of nature to express your thoughts, and with lemons and marigolds, how could one miss. Lot's of emotion and you could almost feel the passion in this write. Loved it and well worth the read. |
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