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Susan
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shiver winds blow cold
they whisper of blue ice days
and frozen flow tears


s.a.t.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

© Copyright 2004 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
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A beautiful Senryu Susan.  The combination of shivers and whispers is perfect.
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Susan
Lovely write, enjoyed.
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Susan~
This is just lovely~
You may have just inspired a little form-thought to flow~
Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
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Honestly... you have a way with words.... a wonderful way! Spectacular...I really do look up to you and your work. You are so talented and should be proud of yourself.

                 *Allison*

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the prophesy of the winds as it sweeps us in its path
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Where is my coat?   Sheesh,  not yet, ok?
Remember,  that is why I live DOWN SOUTH..
Yeah,  way down there....where the hurricanes
grow!
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Beautifully expressed Susan and much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Susan
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Thank you all for your kind comments -

Devine Child - you are very sweet, thank you so much -

Barry - would that I could move, as the bite is in the air already here - brrrrr, then again hurricanes aren't exactly a summer picnic!

Have a good night all -

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.
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burrrrrrr
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short.... but impacting...

nicely done ma'am
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You have so much talent susan...this is another amazing write!

~Alli~

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Susan
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thank you my friends - you warm this chill -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

 
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