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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2004-10-06 01:06 PM


I listened to the winds gently blowing
heard was the call of ancient knowing
beyond tomorrow, passing by yesterday
providing answers along the way.

The skies no longer were merely blue
they now held the secrets of eternal truth
sunlight did not just dance over the waters
it's reflections were wisdom of all that matters.

Grass was not only the colors of green
it represented the all of things yet unseen
Mother Earth sang sweetly to me her song
as sun disappeared, future arrived with the dawn.

Nature's elements blended in perfect harmony
as I reveled in her majestic tranquility.




The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....


[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-06-2004 02:41 PM).]

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Gaia
1 posted 2004-10-06 01:23 PM


I need to listen to the winds you are listening to this morning.
Thanking you for these words, and Dixie for the inspire.

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2 posted 2004-10-06 02:40 PM



See what I mean ?

*Huglets*
~*Marge*`

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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A Mountain Paradise
3 posted 2004-10-06 05:08 PM


Hi Donna, this is so magnificent. The song of the earth is a delight to the ears of those who take the time to listen.

I love your words and song.

huggles, Marti


A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows.
–St. Francis of Assisi

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4 posted 2004-10-06 05:34 PM


So very very beautiful dear Donna!
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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5 posted 2004-10-06 05:51 PM


Gentle,
A lovely moment, enjoyed.

passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-10-07 02:42 AM


how in the world did I inspire this...little ole me?

wow! This is gorgeous, and I'm so flattered to be a part of it!

hugs to ya lady

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7 posted 2004-10-07 02:44 AM


forgot the library button
HopeS
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8 posted 2004-10-07 06:15 AM


You captured the beauty perfectly Donna and most beautifully expressed

Hope

Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2004-10-07 01:11 PM


Kacy, may what you hear when listening be enlightening to you!
Hugs and thanks.

Marge, thank you for this, and for that!  Gawd woman, that
was extremely beautiful and touched my heart...

Marti, so glad you listened along...

Nanc, hugs back atcha! and thanks.

Seymour, glad you could enjoy a moment with me.

Dix, thank you for that moment of inspire.
Email on its way this evening when I can get
a chance.

Hope thanx, and it is so good to see you back in the pages of blue again!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2004-10-08 09:32 AM


Dixie, sorry that email didnt get out last night, but should be on it's way today. Hugs....
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
11 posted 2004-10-11 09:56 AM


Now you know
this is a keeper!

LeeJ
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12 posted 2004-10-11 10:51 AM


would love to hear you read your poetry

awesome write....


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13 posted 2004-10-11 10:22 PM


beauty-- wrapped in gentle wind....luv you

~~*~~
Read between the lines
look deep into each word
and you will understand the
depth of my soul (GE)
~~**~~

Gentle Spirit
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14 posted 2004-10-12 07:44 AM


Kari, Lee, and Lauren,
thank you each for taking the time to stop in. Hugs and peace.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

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