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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2004-10-06 12:08 PM



The love you give so freely,
Goes beyond all fantasy.
You feed the flowers of my soul,
In the garden heart of me.

Your smile is the sunshine,
That makes heart roses grow.
And when I'm in your presence,
I glow from head to toe.

Your eyes are twinkling starlight.
They shine their love on me,
Adding Light to my life,
~ May it last foreverly.

© Copyright 2004 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2004-10-06 12:16 PM


Don't look now, but I think your heart just became a canvas of paint for the brush your love holds.  

Loved the cadence in this one.  Read it aloud and it came across like the glaze on Krispy Kreme Doughnut.  Smooth and sweet!


Toerag
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Ala bam a
2 posted 2004-10-06 12:32 PM


Lovely write gal....You were writing this to me...right?...I know I feed your soul...right?...(okay, so it's mostly manure but even so?)
Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2004-10-06 12:44 PM


love looks lovely on you Linda!
passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-10-06 12:49 PM


yes...I pray it may
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2004-10-06 01:46 PM


EarthyOne~
Now you just KNOW this one caught my eye~
How loverly is your use of foreverly ?
VERERLY~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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miscellanea
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OH
6 posted 2004-10-06 01:52 PM


Ahhhh, a breath of fresh air!  Needed that.
       luv and hugs,
              miscellanea

Susan
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walking the surreal
7 posted 2004-10-06 02:37 PM


Yes, may it - so sweet and loving, Linda - a smile to the heart.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
8 posted 2004-10-06 05:29 PM


Earth Angel
Your foreverly is heavenly
And your heavenly is maidenly
And though you say it jokenly
It still makes me quite tingly.

Corinne
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9 posted 2004-10-06 05:33 PM


Really lovely, Earth Angel.

Especially liked:


You feed the flowers of my soul,
In the garden heart of me.


Corinne


suthern
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10 posted 2004-10-07 10:11 AM


Oh, lady... I could repeat the lines I love best... but I'd simply be recopying your poem... So beautiful... yes! *S*
Margherita
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Eternity
11 posted 2004-10-07 06:18 PM


quote:
And when I'm in your presence,
I glow from head to toe.



... and this is love's intention!

Tender write
full of light.

Love and hugs.
Margherita


iliana
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12 posted 2004-10-12 02:32 AM


May it truly last foreverly, Linda!  This was really loverly!   and hugs, lily jo
Earth Angel
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13 posted 2004-10-12 10:11 AM


Mark ~

I hope you don't mind me calling you "cute" ~ but you are one cute Cherokee! Thanks for the spirited reply!

Big hug, big smile
Linda

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2004-10-12 10:14 AM


Toe ~

Yes, Darling. You know that I was writing this to you! ~ We just won't tell my boyfriend! lol

~ and yes, you do feed my soul with your wit and charm.

Love your rascallion ways! You put the fluff in my feathers on wet and dreary days!

Loves 'n hugs,
EA

Earth Angel
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15 posted 2004-10-12 10:14 AM


Gentle Spirited One ~

Loved your lovely alliterative reply!

Huggums,
Linda

Earth Angel
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16 posted 2004-10-12 10:15 AM


p s ~

That was very nice of you! Thank you, Dear Dixie!


Linda

Earth Angel
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17 posted 2004-10-12 10:17 AM


Marge ~

I appreciate your response "VERELY" much!

Loving hugs,
EO
P.S. I got a new super duper computer! Yippee eye kye yeah!  

Earth Angel
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18 posted 2004-10-12 10:30 AM


misc'e ~

Glad my poem breathed some fresh air into you! lol I aim to please!


EA

Earth Angel
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19 posted 2004-10-12 10:31 AM


Susan ~

~ and I thank YOU for the "heart smile"!

Heart smiles from across the miles!

Linda

Earth Angel
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20 posted 2004-10-12 10:32 AM


Mr. T. ~

Ooo la la! I'm beginning to feel quite tingly myself! lol Thank you for that delightful poetic response!


EA

Earth Angel
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21 posted 2004-10-12 10:34 AM


Corinne ~

Hi there, stranger! Good to hear from you. Hope all is well with you!

Warm hugs,
Linda
P.S. ~  I'm rather partial to those two lines myself! lol

Earth Angel
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22 posted 2004-10-12 10:36 AM


suthern ~

Why, thank you, Dear Southern Belle. May you know foreverly love forever!

Loves 'n hugs,
EA

Earth Angel
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23 posted 2004-10-12 10:38 AM


Margherita ~

"Tender write
full of light" ~ Awww, thank you, Dear Margherita!

Lotsa Love 'n Light,
Linda

Earth Angel
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24 posted 2004-10-12 10:40 AM


iliana ~

Well, if it doesn't last foreverly, I will be able to look back and say that it certainly had been loverly!

Warm hugs to you, lovely lily jo!
Linda

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