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Passing Things
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Passing Things |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Passing Things Each day I pass so many things That fades away like dreams at night They pass before my eyes in strings Like puppets held within the light They dance upon a scale of mind In weighted down finality A scale that’s balanced by the blind To make a stones reality Each stone inscribed by times ingest Stands before the passer by A symbol of a journeys quest A thing that change has turned to vie Each day we pass so many things Showing in the path of light It passes like the bells that ring And disappear into the night This vision is of times begun I know my heart that all is one |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Another delightful read from you Sy! Time for a cup of chai today? You relax and I'll pour. ~Morning hugs and tea, Nancy~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
comfort zone of season's soul a dream's descent which is so benifical to culture what will be...which is basically out of our hands, unless we fight in discord...making our own roads a bloody mess.... Smiles and hugs you incredible poet you (Wink) the mind is a tremendous thing, and the questions become answers, little rolly polly lights...and there you are Sy...each and every morning Thank you |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
"Each day we pass so many things Showing in the path of light It passes like the bells that ring And disappear into the night" ******************* The whole write was great but I really liked the above verse the best. Sort of just rang something inside me. Maybe not disappearing completely though as you did pen this in realization I take it, so possibly on hidden in the back of our minds until called upon. Much enjoyed. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Dear Seymour, yes, all is one! Whatever theme you choose you are just great in your poetic reflections. The human brain is more complex than even the most fabulous giant electronic center. A constant flow of data, visions, thoughts .... to keep all well ranged is another problem, some things luckily fade! Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
They dance upon a scale of mind In weighted down finality A scale that’s balanced by the blind To make a stones reality Each stone inscribed by times ingest Stands before the passer by A symbol of a journeys quest A thing that change has turned to vie ====================================== Sy-babers, this is such a gem of pen...I love this wisdom filled, cadence kissed, offering. Those two verses alone are worth poetic gold for the truth and they teach us, for the depth they speak of, for the exploration and discovery they lead us to. Me thinks I will take this one on my next hike to the creek and read it to the rocks and trees.  I know my heart that all is one (this I already knew about you)   *winkiewinkie*  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Thank you sweet. LeeJ A rolly polly light, that's me. Mark, Nothing dissipates forever. LOL Thank you Margherita, Yes, love and hugs. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Please let me know what they say. LOL Love you. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
"Passing things" has been a mantra of mine lately. Happy to see your take on them. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wranx Happy to see your comment. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Good Morning Sy .... You write the most incredible poems and I always look forward to reading them and having tea with you and the girls! Sometimes we get so comfortable in our surroundings, we miss what is right under our nose. Sending hugs, Marti |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Sir Tumbling Weed!  I for one, am thankful that you are able to share your visions so poetically as you go tumbling along through life! Roll on! Write on! Angel luvvums, EA |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'This vision is of times begun I know my heart that all is one' And you, sir ... are all heart! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marti, Hugs back sweety. Earth Angel My tumble isn't as far as it used to be. LOL Marge, And you are a love. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
indeed glad I didn't mis this one |
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