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soul drifter
Senior Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 711
Colorado

0 posted 2004-10-05 02:59 PM

Green Wind

It’s only me,
the young green wind and me
running fingers through your hair
mining your dreams for stardust there
it’s just the envious green wind
blowing ‘cross your face again
and in the sea, in the moon kissed sea
there is a heartbeat slumbering in your arms
there are Pacific eyes keeping me warm
and the green wind pushing the tides away
a smiling moon gently caressing the day
to fall asleep in starlit keeps
between the stars and beach we meet
and the green wind hushes to a blue breeze
slipping around our knees
alone together, molding into one
holding close our warmth of the sun
the endless blue breeze hushes to clash
with the roars of the waves, at last
you and I will last always
our love growing deeper through the days
and the green wind
that old spring wind
blowing around us again

"Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-10-05 03:03 PM

SIGH....how very lovely and soft this is. I enjoyed this very much....

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-10-05 07:22 PM

Very nice - I love the color play-

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-10-06 04:45 AM

neat write!

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2004-10-11 10:30 PM

sigh...wind has a way of doing that

~~*~~
Read between the lines
look deep into each word
and you will understand the
depth of my soul (GE)
~~**~~

babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

5 posted 2004-10-12 11:46 AM

feeling the youthful, sapling spirit in this...lovely visuals thru out...

**babygirL**

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2004-10-12 01:25 PM

the endless blue breeze hushes to clash
with the roars of the waves, at last

a wave is just a small piece of the entire sea, as is these many visuals you have so generously painted with love.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2004-10-12 03:50 PM

"there is a heartbeat slumbering in your arms"

My favorite line..

The entire poem was wonderful!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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