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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-10-05 12:19 PM



Beneath your
fingers -

The weight of silence pressing
close against my lips.

A gentle urge...to let this be
enough.

Knowing we continue...

In the moments left
unspoken.




© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2004-10-05 01:09 PM


Beautiful Eric!
I have missed reading you.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

LeeJ
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2 posted 2004-10-05 01:10 PM


enjoyed
MGROVES
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3 posted 2004-10-05 03:09 PM


short and sweet but says alot


Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2004-10-05 03:10 PM


OH...sigh....
very softly romantic and passionate...
just how I like 'em....

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2004-10-05 03:29 PM


Ericc
Well said, enjoyed.

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6 posted 2004-10-05 10:48 PM


Sometimes silence can shred a heart... you remind of those times when it makes a heart soar. *S* Beautiful!
passing shadows
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7 posted 2004-10-06 04:29 AM


sigh
Margherita
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8 posted 2004-10-06 08:36 AM


quote:
Knowing we continue...

In the moments left
unspoken.




Yes, to let this be enough keeps the door wide open to the wonderful awareness of a never ending flow of love.

You have this extraordinary ability to point to the essential with just a hint ... but what hint that this!

Loving you,
Margherita

NewEnglandlazurlu
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9 posted 2004-10-06 10:55 AM


Hi Eric .... you've said a lot for the imagination in just a few lines!

Love this .... huggles, Marti

HopeS
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10 posted 2004-10-06 11:05 AM


sigh !!! yes this is those wonderful  moments when silence can mean so much

Hope

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11 posted 2004-10-06 11:18 AM


Silence can speak volumes...as can these few words.


Linda

Mark Bohannan
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12 posted 2004-10-06 02:02 PM



Ahhhhhhh ... such wonderfully expressed thoughts and all unspoken.  Excellent!!

***************

Knowing we continue...

In the moments left
unspoken
****************

That's it exactly.  Wonderful

Midnitesun
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Gaia
13 posted 2004-10-06 02:08 PM


quietly listening, to another's heartbeat
Susan
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walking the surreal
14 posted 2004-10-06 02:38 PM


  

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

exhale
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15 posted 2004-10-06 03:41 PM


this was beautiful.
ecrivan
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16 posted 2004-10-06 07:22 PM


again a world of sentiment captured in a few words..


Margherita
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17 posted 2004-10-10 09:34 AM


Just came back to let this gem of yours release its beautiful essence again ... it has such a soothing effect .....

Loving you, Margherita

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