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mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
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0 posted 2004-10-04 06:02 PM



To yen of scented wind you
brought,
be found in some of me.
Where wilder fires are sent til’ then,
from fostered time I see.
Taste the dust of wanted stories,
the muddles slide with ease.
Bend and twist, the galley’s send,
the glaze so ought to be.
Call me back from limbos end
and moments lost at sea.
To drift in bliss, you want of me.
Tell me, will you please.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2004-10-04 06:17 PM


Very captivating write!
Hope delicately expressed.
Love, Margherita

Martie
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California
2 posted 2004-10-04 06:37 PM


I enjoyed this...it had a good feel to it and sounded lovely in reading.  
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-10-04 07:15 PM


Very beautiful...especially read aloud.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
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New York
4 posted 2004-10-04 08:36 PM


Wayne?

I am in awe of this . . .
drift away, sir . . .

Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2004-10-04 09:58 PM


sweetly scented
aromatherapy poetry

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