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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-10-04 08:17 AM

when you ride there
godiva and her charms
and you cut your hair too

you say anyone can gallop
and ride at night
but a slow walk

in middle day time
down my busy street
with the crowds of me around

do I like the view
and do you look the same
as when you were but a dream

when I wondered at your eyes

_______________

Dark

scribblenote; lovely is more lovely when it is
glass with day touch, open and willing to be
fragile, when it says, this is me..

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-10-04 08:28 AM

When truth is revealed
in its innocence,
there is nothing lovlier.

As is this piece.

Good morning, Sir...

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2004-10-04 08:29 AM

you say anyone can gallop
and ride at night
but a slow walk

in middle day time
down my busy street
with the crowds of me around

I love where you take me MrD

M

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-10-04 08:50 AM

anyone can do the can can!

hehe...written with marvelous inginuity, as always...

Good Morning sir
and Happy Monday

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-10-04 09:31 AM

Yes..open and honest view.
Much enjoyed sir D.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-10-04 10:06 AM

Words of compassion and acceptance, of tender finger touches to heart - most lovely this.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2004-10-04 08:00 PM

what a wonderful way to say something usually said so routinely

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2004-10-04 08:21 PM

DS

It is good to see the light in someone's eyes, wheather it is moonlight or sunlight. Your poem is touching.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2004-10-04 08:40 PM

to the very soul, indeed.
Beautiful.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2004-10-05 12:45 PM

Enjoyed...James

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2004-10-05 12:52 PM

"do I like the view
and do you look the same
as when you were but a dream

when I wondered at your eyes"

you make soft, floaty sighs

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