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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2004-10-03 10:57 PM



That which I had ever doubted
Seethes reflexive intonations, astir
Each naked breath chained to another
Gasping at eloquent air, pulling in and out
Damp and permanent despair

These scars upon your chest
Welt let brandish raw, the ache of unforgiven sin
You cover yourself to my eyes…favoring disguise
The changes shape my face, compassioned lines replace
A sliding touch upon the wounds

And further to the lost horizons
Setting free the strobe of mere a thousand suns
Born with vehemence upon so many hit and runs
That shocks your system in a clench of wrists
Eyes so full the solar storm delves into these darkened wells

And unafraid, I kiss the tender sting away
Lest you forget the purpose and intent the mighty pray

Copyright Kkh 10/03/04

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Susan
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1 posted 2004-10-04 01:43 AM


I like the compassion in this- moving.

Susan

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2 posted 2004-10-04 03:08 AM


Kathleen, excellent writing, as always.
Thank you for sharing.
Hugs,
Ethel

Robert Joseph
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3 posted 2004-10-04 05:23 AM


Your words are exact and chosen with heartfelt intent...Greatly enjoyed!

Robert Joseph

Robert Joseph
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4 posted 2004-10-04 05:35 AM


And further to the lost horizons
Setting free the strobe of mere a thousand suns


...and wanting to add, these among my favorite lines.

Robert Joseph

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