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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2004-10-03 11:17 AM




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Today in the Park

Nature held its breath to hear

the trees chat of love


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© Copyright 2004 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2004-10-03 11:20 AM


OMG!!!  This is SO beautiful!!
Both the words and the picture!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-10-03 11:36 AM


Margherita
Next time I'll be listening. :Sqieeze:

Bonnie j
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3 posted 2004-10-03 12:04 PM


With fall in the air we do having talking trees. Step outside and listen. The little creatures of nature are singing in beauitful tones.
Hugs
BonBon

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Gaia
4 posted 2004-10-03 12:13 PM


Thank you for this beautiful photo and write!
*keeper*

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2004-10-03 01:05 PM


Margherita~
And what a lovely chat it is~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2004-10-03 01:43 PM


Oh yes...what a beautiful discussion.
Thanks for the lift.
TD

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
7 posted 2004-10-03 01:59 PM




Sunlit discussions
play on park bench in whispers
are you listening?


beautiful write and presentation

ecrivan
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my own state
8 posted 2004-10-03 03:00 PM


nice haiku, enjoyed


Susan
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walking the surreal
9 posted 2004-10-03 03:52 PM


Oh, Margherita - sigh lovely.

Susan

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coyote
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10 posted 2004-10-03 06:57 PM


Love the laconic verse,
and this style is my fav.

Great job!

coyote 8)

Copperbell
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11 posted 2004-10-03 07:37 PM


sooo nice - I love the picture - our trees are mostly yellows.
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