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~K~
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since 2004-07-27
Posts 148


0 posted 2004-10-03 06:24 AM



This is my world,
is it not?
Mine to survey
and explore
mine to conquer
or ignore,

mine to
transform.

This is
my perspective,

my angle,

my tangled corner.

This is:

my whisper
in the wind
my drop
in the flood
my blood
in the God.

This is
my contributuion
to the future;

this endless
string of questions,

still begging to be answered.

© Copyright 2004 ~K~ - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2004-10-03 10:54 AM


You have done a great job here!

Yes ... it is ours ... to love and "to transform" ...

Your poem is already an answer, it means you care!


Love, Margherita

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2004-10-03 12:15 PM


K, this is a wonderful way to look at the universe and your unique place within it.
Aenimal
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3 posted 2004-10-03 02:46 PM


It is indeed. Excellent write, i haven't been around much so may I extend a very very belated welcome
serenity blaze
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4 posted 2004-10-03 06:30 PM


I love the way you think.

Much enjoyed.

littlewing
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New York
5 posted 2004-10-04 01:37 AM


I, forever stumbling, as well . . .

Beautiful writing, K

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6 posted 2004-10-04 10:43 PM


amazing write
absolutely

and an endless string of questions.....

better get started asking then

enjoyed you as always ~K~

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