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October Women
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October Women |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
October Women It seems I'm born to love October women seems I'd destined to be chasing them down the finger painted autumn dusk drawn by their warm scented musk holding my heart in my hands Before the falling curtain of night I plead my case before the light of the fading embers of the sun you see there's this special one holding my heart in her hands Ah, to capture her grace in my art to live within her warm scarlet heart that's all I'll ever need for life this love cuts me like a knife it's a feeling I can't explain She's got that rospetal blush coloring her smile such a wonderful smile, mile to mile curling like a spring bloom when I act like a fool a fool reserved only for her I was born to an October woman so I think know a little about them in the smiling eyes of the coming dawn with all my soul, I dedicate my song to a certain special October woman who has made me see who I am she probably doesn't even realize what an effect she has on me I've got a rosepetal love burning inside me and someday I'll let my feelings free so she'll finally know and inside her it will grow let it keep her warm in the October snow let it stay with her and if she ever needs it straight from the source well, I'll be right here. "Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"down the finger painted autumn dusk" I really like this line here... nicely done  (my mom's b-day is this month too) |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
just something about them for some reason makes them become your desire |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hope this one works so you don't have to wait for next October...James |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
I truly loved this piece because there was just something so tender and loving about it. I could feel your gentle spirit in it and your steadfast love for your October woman. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I like this alot! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very enjoyable read. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Sigh - my Mother was an October woman, a moste lovely and beautiful soul, inside and out - who can blame you. Beautiful. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ah!! my sister will love this! She's an October woman!! great read Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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